Caroline Kendall

Hi, I'm currently writing a fantasy romance book and I need help. Please get back to me if you can. 
          It's called 'how the stars aline'

hello...I am currently writing a fantasy book and my first language is not english ...nevertheless this is my first book and although I think my story is not that horrible I would really like a second opinion so I was wandering if maybe you are free to edit it.  please let me know

Hello?