capi1995

Ok so i have posted my very first story! Check it out when u can.....i did not proofread so im sure there are a lot of things that are wrong with it but i just wanted to test the waters and see how people would respond to it before i got serious. i literally just sat down and wrote for the past hour...please feel free to leave comments on how i can improve but be gentle guys. Im a newbie :) 

capi1995

Ok so i have posted my very first story! Check it out when u can.....i did not proofread so im sure there are a lot of things that are wrong with it but i just wanted to test the waters and see how people would respond to it before i got serious. i literally just sat down and wrote for the past hour...please feel free to leave comments on how i can improve but be gentle guys. Im a newbie :)