I know that you're in need of some help in your story. And if you want to improve just give it a try in my critique shop.
Here's the link: https://my.w.tt/sgYgeNu7UR
The following are the parts that I will critique in your story.
Outer Parts:
☑ Title
☑ Book Cover
☑ Blurb
Inner Parts:
☑ Plot:
☑ Exposition
☑ Conflict
☑ Conclusion
☑ Phasing
☑ Narration:
☑ Spelling and Grammar
☑ Show vs. Tell
☑ Choice of words
☑ Style
☑ POV
☑ Characters:
☑ Character Development
☑ Dialogue
☑ Strengths and Weaknesses
Uwah! Nababaliw na naman files ng drafts ko! Nawawala ang mga stories ko! Humaygash! Gyumin! Help me to find it! Hawak ko ang buhay mo! Hahaha. Pero seriouly, nawawa talaga. Iiyak na ba ako?
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