Hi, I'm Lin and I'm rewriting My Immortal so it sounds less like a 10 year old wrote it and more like a pretentious 16 year old wrote it while keeping all the elements intact & perfectly serious.

I can't promise this will be good, but it's impossible for it to not be better.
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  • JoinedJuly 10, 2018

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My Immortal (But It's Slightly Better) by butitsbetter
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Hi and welcome to My Immortal But It's Slightly Better! I'm here to rewrite My Immortal to read more like, yo...
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