bryxdominates

ITS MAH BIRTHDAY WOO

iBookwarmi

Can you please check out my story 'The Fading Past' and let me know

iBookwarmi

@brynnaistrash Thank you so much!! You have no idea how much this means to me. I know you are right! I felt that too..I will keep the things in mind and try to improve definately!! Thanks once again :)
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bryxdominates

@iBookwarmi i did and it was good, i would maybe make the chapters longer, and space things out a bit and not be so rushed, but hey that's just my advice. I will diffidently  keep reading :)
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