I write a lot, but I've had some trouble making this story really pop.

I'll be publishing this book this year, but I need reader's feedback on one of the last drafts. It's missing something but I can't put my finger on it.

I'd love to hear your feedback so I can make it the best version of the story as possible.


Thank you for any help!
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breakfastbythesea breakfastbythesea Mar 15, 2017 12:12AM
I write a lot, but I've had some trouble making this story really pop.I'll be publishing this book this year, but I need reader's feedback on one of the last drafts. It's missing something but I can...
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