uglygir11

girl or boy, i just wanted to say i absolutely loved this story when i first read it, and i just finished rereading it. obvi if you quit wattpad and you don't really find as much motivation or interest in finishing this story i understand, which doesn't really matter cause its your book at the end of the day, but yeah. if you don't finish it could you just say what ends up happening with kyle and jason. and what happened in ryan's past. and if peter and the brothers were able to evolve themselves and relationships. i would love if jason got a romantic partner or something to help him realize how terrible he's been. again tho it's your book so take with this what you will.

Avocadopineapplelol

Hi,I am a huge fan of your story And I love how it is going yes There can be a little roughness but I It's still shows at the brothers care about each other I do not think that you should listen to that comment telling you to do suicides or anything like that. Doing something like that we completely ruin this book There is a book called Lincolns older brothers And it has something along the lines of brothers Fighting with each other but Along the lines they changed the story to the youngest brother trying to kill himself and ending up in the hospital it completely change the book and that author Lost a lot of good readers because of the change in that book There is a lot of people saying that they do not agree with the whole suicide thing and you should totally not do it  will probably ruin the whole I know that I will probably stop reading it  If you change it to a suicide sad book Obviously this is your book And you are free to do whatever you want with it and I think you were an amazing writer But please do not turn this book into some sad hospital suicide messed up stuff I like where this book is at And holiday they  fight but they still show that they love each other Please do not change how this book is

bnnn2003

I honestly don’t mind the comments, in fact I really like to read them and see other people’s opinions and it does give me a lot of ideas for the book. The reason I haven’t replied much is because I’m on holiday right now so by the time I see a comment there are already new comments that have replied, so I just thought I would stay out of it for now.
            
            I’m taking my time with this in developing a middle ground that I think everyone will enjoy  
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Avocadopineapplelol

Hey I am sorry that so many bickering over the whole suicide thing is happening in your comment section We are just trying to give you our opinions but obviously you are the author in the obviously respect that If you were comfortable can you please give me your opinion on The whole matter I personally and a Lot of other people do not think that you should change how the brothers act maybe take it down like 1 notch But please please do not do any self farming or something like that Or suicide it would probably change the whole book and I would hate for that to happen along with a lot of other people
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cloud_bxy

Hey, I'm a fan of your story, which I really like a lot and I'm excited to see how it continues, but going back to what I was saying, I noticed that your book does not have a cover as such, and I would really like to offer to do it,  I know that I am literally a stranger than the internet, but if you are interested, talk to me and so I can show you some of my "work" of course if you accept xd