Hi , i want to give you some suggestion for the recent story you are writing .
Aryan falls in love with imlie as she is but he doesn't tell her because he thinks she now everything about how many girl's I have dated before, so she will consider herself just pass time like another girl .
But his heart does not agree and he goes to tell her his feelings but before that she leaves India for students .
When she comes back to India , he confessed his feelings to her but imlie refuses.
She not accept his proposal because she think I am not ugly , Moti as I was before that is why he proposed me, if I had been the way I an today, he would have never proposed to me .
She wants people to like her just the way she is
And she accepted the some form Aryan because she has liked him the way he is .
How did imlie become thin ?
When she went out to study she met a male friend and he understand her problem and helped her.
That boy has also come to India with imlie and he also like her.
But Aryan don't like their closeness and he become a very possessive about her.
If you like this then please show this to your story if you don't like
it's okay.
Thank