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Sister I make a story can you give me some suggestions. How is it. I wanted your appreciation 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/393024993?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Mafiaboss018

https://www.wattpad.com/story/392308945-%F0%9D%90%8D%F0%9D%90%88%F0%9D%90%86%F0%9D%90%87%F0%9D%90%93%F0%9D%90%93%F0%9D%90%88%F0%9D%90%8C%F0%9D%90%84-%F0%9D%9F%8F%F0%9D%9F%96%2B

https://www.wattpad.com/story/388801152-%F0%9D%90%92%F0%9D%90%94%F0%9D%90%8D%F0%9D%90%91%F0%9D%90%88%F0%9D%90%92%F0%9D%90%84

Check it out , ✨ 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/388411710?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Sparkle_sunshinee7

Hi..
          Hope you are doing well..
          Sry for posting this 
          Have a look hope you like it..
          Do votes and comments do..
          
          
          Have a nice day..
          
          ^_^
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/373838873?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Shriya2806

Sorry to post without permission , but please check out my book , I hope you like the plot enemies to lovers  https://www.wattpad.com/story/368493388?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=ArvaDhandore

Hie , can y'all view my work and tell me if I need help or not ? Am new here. Thank you

Girl are u good ? Where is she 

Hi

girly you good? Havent heard from you in forever please tell me your not dead