Hi !! So ik you said to not read the book and that your going to re-right it so I fell like when you re-right it but I feel like the book would be a lot more interesting if your oc doesn’t yk like de-sociopath ( is that even a word) so quickly I’m only on chapter 6 and I feel like she is almost completely derailed from the original plan and like broke vary fast it just felt like I was reading a classic girl who the “good girl” and has a completely diff personality but actually is really sensitive and that’s fine I just feel like it happened way to quickly yk? And I’m not trying to be mean and say that sociopaths can’t like people or stuff but I feel like she started like her friends to fast And in quotes for this website talking about sociopath and friendship “A sociopath may not be interested in friendship in the way you understand it. Instead of friendship with you, they may be seeking a loyal follower. They might treat you like a friend only to gain access to your companionship. In these cases, as long as you provide some value to them, they will keep you around.” Thats all I really have to say and you don’t have to listen to me i just felt like giving my opinion and sorry again if this sounds rude.oh and like your writing style
