Your story is really good!!!! I love it!!!
"And may the odds be ever in our favor" *Effie voice*
@theoddsinourfavor no problemo, i really like your work, you have a talent. i most certainly look forward to some more postings of your books. They show some great promise. If you like you can check out some mine, i'm very open to any advise or comments or whathaveyou. Thanks. ps. I'm in love with Peeta <3<3