A brother and sister escape from an abusive father in Candor to the ironically daunting Dauntless compound. With only each other, they must fight to stay together, and to stay in Dauntless. The alternative? Become...

Just a little thing I'm doing to hone my writing skills. This is strictly casual, I just need to practice writing good dialogue and imagery and so on. Comments would be nice just to tell me what I'm doing right or...