alienpajamapants

I might start publishing on other fanfic sites soon... Not sure yet. I’ll post my info if I do so y’all can find my stories there, too. 

JodiJenkinsRegazzini

This was a great story!  One thing I would reword is the movie pieces. The story line didn’t need that!  This was a great stand out piece!  I would broaden that. Instead of Loki dying ( or not dying) as the movie have him perish in a different way but come back later so you have that climax piece.  It is an excellent concept though.