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OMG people. I was reading through chapter 43 of HATBBC and WHY AM I SO CRINGE. What is up with me always using the word 'fuck' and getting my characters into weird situations. I think I was just one hell of a horny bastard reading too much mafia romance lmao. Anyway, I want to change some things about the story to make it less cringe, and give it some more meat. What do you think?