@Fave_556 hi!!! I actually true did enjoy the book, especially the complex dynamic with DJ and Alannah bc in some scenes they had nice banter but in others it was Leo brutal (like the one with the mom)… I also really liked dj bc her monologue was hilarious and kinda chaotic… I love flawed characters…. The storyline is good so far but I’m waiting for them to meet…. I didn’t get charlottes role in the story yet idk…. Could be bc I read late at night… all in all I like ur writing style so pls continue, I’m excited for what’s to come💜💜💜 and yes, it has potential…. Just keep ur writing as it is… and build up… also cliffhanger endings r great💜 good luck, tell me when u write again