I hate when a book isn't finished when the plot is unclear. I used to be guilty of the same thing but now I realize that there needs to be a little bit of clearing up if you decide to stop updates on a book. Example; I had just finished reading all the chapters of an X Reader with two other characters. With it being a duo character X Reader, there was a bit of confusion when the reader just outright ditched one character in the beginning of the story and started development with the other. There was no loop back to the first character as to what happened and if there was any clearance between him and the reader. It honestly disappoints me how easily he was just tossed aside as if it was only meant to be an X Reader with the second character that created development of a relationship. There needs to be more contrast and plot set up. A small disclaimer, I'm not being biased towards the first character either. This is mainly critique and tips, not to be attacking the writer because the story was otherwise well written in sense of POV. That's all I have to say. ÚwÙ
