_emmers_06

happy birthday  dani!!!!!!!!!!!

dalal121245

          “Imagine this, it’s late at night and we are walking the streets of New York I lock my arm through yours and rest my head on your shoulder....you ask if I’m tired, and I reply with droopy eyes....”only a little” you’d laugh and then proceed to carry me princess style but I yawn and inform you how I don’t want to tier you, then you’d say OUR loft is only a little away, you carry me and I fall asleep in your arms witnessing it the beaming city of New York, we’d get to are stop...still carrying me you’d open our door and proceed to close it with a little help from your foot you’d lay me down take off my shoes....tuck me in then kneel down in front of me and just sorta watch me in my  serene state of sleep but the second you get up I’d latch my arms around your neck and whisper “don’t go” then you’d tell me how you wouldn’t ever participate in the activity of going anywhere without me, you’d then get into bed with me and envelop me with a big nice embrace from behind and suddenly all the tired in the world ceased to have existed.”  please share my writing opinions and feedback!!

dalal121245

@imemmaherron06 thank you so much!! It’s actually not really a story but a deep desire of mine....but I’d love to incorporate it into a story please share!!
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_emmers_06

@dalal121245 
            I love it it's amazing. Could you make the main characters names Emma? You don't have to I'm just asking.
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