ZorFlash

Anything I could improve on

ZorFlash

@Oncle_Raj thanks so much also please please call out any spelling mistakes or things that don’t quite make sense pls
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_DukDuk_

@ZorFlash nothing so far, it's going good, i'll let you know of anything
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ZorFlash

Thanks for the votes I take it you’re enjoying Burning Passion 

ZorFlash

@Oncle_Raj thanks I also wanted Kara’s actions even under red Kryptonite had serious ramifications which I totally think happened. Lois isn’t going to forgive her easily for what she did even though Kara was on Red Kryptonite and therefore Kal isn’t going to forgive her quickly either even though he’s a bit more understanding 
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_DukDuk_

@ZorFlash no, it actually fits to her arrogant freedom. If you take a look at Miraculous Ladybug in New York, the character Majestica was corrupted and felt free to do whatever she wants with no moral restrictions. Morally it wasn't right for Kara to do that but what could be done about the Red Kryptonite's prolonged influence?
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ZorFlash

@Oncle_Raj no worries lol so do you think that I pushed Kara too far having her attack pregnant Lois in the helicopter 
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