Hi Author!
In case you didn’t read my comment on “Devil”, which I suggest you do. Otherwise I am going to write it here!
So, I just want to suggest previewing each chapter before posting it. In all honesty I am also a new writer and I shouldn’t really be speaking, but It is a huge tip. Previewing your book before posting it will be huge help to improve writing.
I am sure that if you just fixed the grammar and the typos in the books it would be awesome! But right now it is kind of impossible to read because it is getting very messy.
I don’t wish this to be seen as hate! It is just a tip that I wish you would look over! ❤️
FISKCJSND OTHERWISE I THINK THE BOOKS WOULD BE GREAT!! :))
TYSM ✌
