ZonokiSho

No one will read this but I wanted to share anyways. I had a dream where I was attacked by a weird spider lady. Imagine the lady from coraline. So I black out and wake up and head outside of my "house". I see my friend and hope me notices me. He doesn't and I see why. My arms have a weird leather layer on top. And so does everywhere else. I decide to walk towards him, he's confused at first until I take my mask off, I see my mask as a doll. I also see his point of view, I see my own face, half of it red like from a mosquito bite, but, I see it isn't completely my face, it's a lighter shade. I take off the rest of my shell, my right arm, thin and broken, oddly shaped. And my left, fat an swollen, the complete opposite. I put everything back on and his friends go to the back of my house while I talk to my friend. Later we go and see their dismembered bodies. Blood everywhere. I run and take my friends hand, leading him to a tree. This tree was huge and had other children like me on there, but they were dead. I tell him to pick an outside layer and he chooses one. We lay down on a old bed outside and I try to sleep, cuddling up next to him. I feel him get up and storm to my house as I run after him. He goes inside and confronts my "mother". She gets mad and tried to kill him before I take him away. I run and end up where i started. An old road by a beach. Me and my friend just stand there before my dream changes. 

ZonokiSho

No one will read this but I wanted to share anyways. I had a dream where I was attacked by a weird spider lady. Imagine the lady from coraline. So I black out and wake up and head outside of my "house". I see my friend and hope me notices me. He doesn't and I see why. My arms have a weird leather layer on top. And so does everywhere else. I decide to walk towards him, he's confused at first until I take my mask off, I see my mask as a doll. I also see his point of view, I see my own face, half of it red like from a mosquito bite, but, I see it isn't completely my face, it's a lighter shade. I take off the rest of my shell, my right arm, thin and broken, oddly shaped. And my left, fat an swollen, the complete opposite. I put everything back on and his friends go to the back of my house while I talk to my friend. Later we go and see their dismembered bodies. Blood everywhere. I run and take my friends hand, leading him to a tree. This tree was huge and had other children like me on there, but they were dead. I tell him to pick an outside layer and he chooses one. We lay down on a old bed outside and I try to sleep, cuddling up next to him. I feel him get up and storm to my house as I run after him. He goes inside and confronts my "mother". She gets mad and tried to kill him before I take him away. I run and end up where i started. An old road by a beach. Me and my friend just stand there before my dream changes. 

ZonokiSho

Oh god. You people, you wonderful people. You people, my followers, readers, everyone, thank you all for the support. You all have made my story grow, just by reading makes me happy, makes me feel inspired, knowing that if I post something, a few or more will read it, just, thank you all!

ZonokiSho

Uh...so am I doing good in writing? If I'm not and you're getting bored of it please tell me so I can improve. 

ZonokiSho

Also thank you.
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ZonokiSho

@TomitoSama I bet you're a good writer. You just need to read a bunch of fanfic, learn from others, then try it.
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