I want to say thank you to all my readers for still reading my dribble, seriously nobody understands writers block like I do so I run with it when my characters are still talking to me. Anyway I'm going to do my best and keep posting as much as I can being a supervisor/trainer at my work I get assigned more work you know if you do a good job you get awarded with more work and no extra pay lol
Anyway I hope you all are still enjoying my work and any suggestions are always welcome.
Thank you all again.
@Zoeismydogsname There are two of us and don't worry, this is normal, even for me, but despite that, you made a great story that I really like, and I'm still going to wait for the next chapters (and I hope Daisuke is on team Z), but other than that, I'm happy to read your stories.
@ZaikoWarrior aw I'm glad there's still excitement for my story lol. I was thinking of going into more of a Sephiroth direction for young Daisuke but we'll see. I should have some time to write more soon ☺️
Why don't you do it like this? Nakame, even though he is physically dead, is in Daisuke's body trying to use him to defeat Goku and Midori-ko, but Goku and Midori-ko manage to help Daisuke defeat and get rid of Nakame and that's it, Daisuke is saved and is part of the good team.
@ZaikoWarrior like these nightmares of daisuke could be Kaname trying to wake up and put an end to goku and midori-ko, but as always they find a way to end kaname and help daisuke get rid of him
He could have transferred his mind into Daisuke, to take revenge on Goku and Midoriko, but with Whis' help Goku, Midoriko and Daisuke expel Nakame forever from Daisuke's mind and body, and Bills and Whis help defeat Nakame forever.
I want to say thank you to all my readers for still reading my dribble, seriously nobody understands writers block like I do so I run with it when my characters are still talking to me. Anyway I'm going to do my best and keep posting as much as I can being a supervisor/trainer at my work I get assigned more work you know if you do a good job you get awarded with more work and no extra pay lol
Anyway I hope you all are still enjoying my work and any suggestions are always welcome.
Thank you all again.
@Zoeismydogsname There are two of us and don't worry, this is normal, even for me, but despite that, you made a great story that I really like, and I'm still going to wait for the next chapters (and I hope Daisuke is on team Z), but other than that, I'm happy to read your stories.
I wonder if this Daisuke saga will be a few chapters or will he be the villain of the story? Why don't you put Freeza as the next villain? Or maybe from another universe?
There's no need to hide it because I already know he's going to be the villain of the story, but if that were the case, wouldn't it be easier for him to be an adult right away instead of a child just to fool everyone?
You know in the next chapter, Midoriko says: my baby is alive, Goku Gohan and she interacting with him with happiness, I want to see Goten's face when he sees his "older" brother
or please don't bring Kaname back because it loses the grace and the great victory of Midoriko, I don't know, bring the Makai Kingdom as enemies, the time break, maybe