Hii! I Just finished to read the First chapter of the FF you made abt the girl named Tori (the Better bride), i like your style of writing and i write too so i know how hard It Is to write a charachter with an oc, but i have to Say that i didnt like AT ALL how you writed yui, more like yui She seemed more like possesed by Cordelia, honestly why did you Say that you didnt want to make her the bad guy, WHEN literally everyone ignored her and didnt let her talk, not even mentioning that they refused to call her yui or with the nicknames, honestly i played all the games and watched the anime plural times and the yui that you writed Is completly another Person from the Canon One, i hole i didnt seem rude but thats Just my opinion