DankoEfoerNoTHinG
Hi! Could it be that you deleted your BC Ff Mirai the blind sibling?
ch1b1ch4n_
Hii! I Just finished to read the First chapter of the FF you made abt the girl named Tori (the Better bride), i like your style of writing and i write too so i know how hard It Is to write a charachter with an oc, but i have to Say that i didnt like AT ALL how you writed yui, more like yui She seemed more like possesed by Cordelia, honestly why did you Say that you didnt want to make her the bad guy, WHEN literally everyone ignored her and didnt let her talk, not even mentioning that they refused to call her yui or with the nicknames, honestly i played all the games and watched the anime plural times and the yui that you writed Is completly another Person from the Canon One, i hole i didnt seem rude but thats Just my opinion
Zecha13
@ch1b1ch4n_ To be honest I don't really like the MC when I look back on that story. I have not stepped out of my mold here. If you want you can try the other Diabolik lovers fanfic I had "The mad one" ? I think is the same. This is the time where I was really trying something new. Sadly it is not completed
Zecha13
@ch1b1ch4n_ That story? No wait I don't remember it too much because that was a long time ago but I think I also did not present Yui very well there. And that was where I based Tori's story.. kinda Not only that but that was one of my earliest and errors just errors everywhere
ch1b1ch4n_
@ Zecha13 im Happy that you know that you were really pushing It so much, i really couldnt reconize yui when i read that story, especially some parts like when She points out that tori Is adopted or when She orders tori to look like her, im Sorry if i seemed too rude again, i really like how you writed the story, i Will read the story of yuis step sister too BC i want to see more of your work
fireyLuna
You have a very good way of writing ✍
sakadesnuts
Berms?
Zecha13
@Crows4Life I'm so sorry. I don't think so. After going all out in the earlier chapters I slowly started running out of references for humor and ideas for the story in general
Lexsimp
Hi umm I just finished reading your book shiro : yui's step sister and it was a great book and I was also actually wondering if u could make a boku no hero academia one pls that would be lovely
Crazy_Fangirls2
Hihi there~
I have read Tori and S. A:Ghost
I'm wondering if you will do a demon slayer fanfic or not in the future?
Zecha13
@Crazy_Fangirls2 Thank you for reading them~ But I'm so sorry to dissapoint but I didn't watch demon slayer
KeiEmEmy
Hiyaa I love your fanfics ❤️
kocho_shinobu18
What happened to yui in the next chapter fill us in on what happened to yui. Thanks
Zecha13
@bloodgangbitch sure, but I don't know if it's just me, but I don't see your book when I went to your account
Crystabal
I was reading Tori the better bride and I was wondering if I got the translation correct on the last chapter. (All of the souls that wander, hear my plead for I am in need of assistanse, lend us your protection) did I get it correct