Hi! I just read the first part of your BNHA fanfic (I'm too lazy to write all of the title), and I like it so far! Although, I wanted to say that it's kind of hard to read it because of the lack of splitting of sentences into paragraphs, and the grammar here and there can be hard to understand. Also, you have a few spelling errors, although some are as simple as "Vald" instead of "Vlad".
Just wanted to note that it's easier to separate text from speech when you put the speech in the begging of the next paragraph (basically separate the speech from other sentences), and you can do the thinking with italics, it's a pretty common thing to do.
Otherwise, I like it! The backstory of how Shinso ended up being with Aizawa (not adopted like most other stories write), and how Aizawa ended up with Present Mic, and I hope you'll write a second part to it!
