WhTvea

Hey all, I know I haven’t been active on here for a very long time, but I’ve been going through a lot mentally for the past couple of years. I know I’ve left you all wanting more and I’m hoping I can find it in myself to update these stories again soon. I appreciate the people who have read what I’ve written and enjoyed it, and I really apologize for being unreliable when it comes to updating these stories. 

WhTvea

Hey all, I know I haven’t been active on here for a very long time, but I’ve been going through a lot mentally for the past couple of years. I know I’ve left you all wanting more and I’m hoping I can find it in myself to update these stories again soon. I appreciate the people who have read what I’ve written and enjoyed it, and I really apologize for being unreliable when it comes to updating these stories. 

WhTvea

This is about my Castiel short story, anyone who has read the first two chapters, am I developing the characters relationship to quickly? I want to be a good writer, so I need thoughts and opinions. Please critique my writing so I can be better!

riverwolfie

@WhTvea yes definetly i think their relationship has developed perfectly
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WhTvea

Too* (This is why I need your help)
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WhTvea

I’m not getting a crazy amount of feedback but the feedback I am getting just warms my heart. Thank you so much and I’ll do my best to continue writing.
          
          Remember to give me suggestions and let me know what I’m doing wrong I’d really appreciate it!!!