Nivirajendran93

Hope,  u show something different in ur story.. Ur evils are stronger than the good ones.. There are tons of characters but no use, those 3 women's are winning everything.. Ur story needs alot of homework, specially the leads needs a makeover on their character sketch.. Literally manik as lost the ability of thinking, Who ever says anything he believes it.. He just randomly sent his wife with a stranger for a course, when shes declared death, he accepted without any cross check the stranger.. Same was with DNA reports of their child, he should have thought about that, Who must have done the test without his and nandini 's knowledge.. Again he left that matter.. At last that girl saying she is pregnant, he's even believeing that, when he knows he haven't slept with her.. Heights of stupidity.. Wake up before its too late 

madhu1997

@Nivirajendran93 you are absolutely right dear in this story nothing changed from part 1 to part 83.... Even manik behaviour same as from starting of story...
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ShivaniBijalwan

Hello......you have told me that only some chapters were left...so I want to ask if by any chance are we near the chapter where Manik come to know about all evil deeds of Zoya........
          You must be thinking why I am asking instead of reading....but I have promised myself that I will read further only when truth will be finally revealed to Manik n everyone.......I think last I read chapter no 45...46.....
          Plzz it's a humble request ...I just want to know are we near the revelation..........Zoya is really evil....I m just confused why Manik can't see that whatever Nandini is saying must be a reason...everyone is ignoring it......I didn't knew what happened in the story after ch 46 but I really want to know.... that is my that wait is over or not........
          I have personally messaged you also about this but I think you might have not seen it....
          Plzzz reply.....
          N a request also if everything thing is ok now....Manik  Should definately win over nandini again...... ...

Nivirajendran93

@ShivaniBijalwan looks like ,u have to wait more, because the story is still there, where u left ,in the same old dead end 
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ShivaniBijalwan

@Nivirajendran93  you know it's really disheartning knowing this.......it really hurts..... though I know it's a story but still it mentally torture me thinking about it......I haven't read after ch46 promising myself to read after everything evil deeds come to light......bcoz I was not at peace reading till that....toh I hoped that if I read further n witness more evil my mind will be in mess.....
            I really wanted to evil end now...
            I am not trying to sound rude but plzz it's high time to end it if you want to write more chapters in this story then you can write some light n happy moments after evil comes to an end......
            Plzz end this evilness as soon as possible it really a request for our writer...
            Plzzz....try to understand...plz
            Waiting n hoping for a positive response..
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Nivirajendran93

@ShivaniBijalwan still not... the evil as become more stronger now
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madhu1997

Manan ff love /business partner in this manik character is sooo confusing like dumb character dear i really don't understand in half story what the hell is manik doing is soo confused character of manik in past did he really betrayed nandini for Zoya like seriously he is so much in blind n can't he see what happening around him  i'm soo frustrated on manik behaviour Yaar I read upto today's chapter but their is no changes in manan relation or manik character.... Sorry if my any word hurt u dear but try to understand dear i didn't see manik sensible or thinking from mind for any situation like nandini accident or kidnapping or finding those culprit... Butttt I'm truly saying dear I'm totally confused like what the hell is going on with manik r u getting what I'm trying to saying coming to zoya what should i say she is totally witch like best friend is better than enemy she really cross all boundaries of friendship i really want to see she suffers to much hell or all khuranas butttt just tell me when this all truth comes out dear its soo toucher to read she getting all what she wants like its not manan ff like it's zoya manik ff????????
          Because in all chapters i have read all about zoya or manik as manan...... 
          
          N is she really pregnant with manik child than I want to shoot him so burtually... 
          I hate him dear.....

anthoniocruso

Sup!

WaniyaJahanzeb

@anthoniocruso same dear, all this stuff to become productive during the lockdown 
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anthoniocruso

@anthoniocruso doing chores, reading and writing, studying event hough exams won't be conducted  and working out etc...you?
            I miss you too.
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WaniyaJahanzeb

@anthoniocruso what ya doin In quarantine? Cause you know I miss you and the others...
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ShivaniBijalwan

Hi...if you don't mind I want to ask when will Manik get to know about Zoya's all evil deeds...???
          Kindly reply...

ShivaniBijalwan

@WaniyaJahanzeb... thanks a lot...it relieved me... knowing this...
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WaniyaJahanzeb

@ShivaniBijalwan your right and trust me it was the last scene  between Manik and zoya which I wrote. now don't you worry about them both 
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ShivaniBijalwan

@WaniyaJahanzeb ... thanks for informing...
            This is last I am troubling you.....just want to say....plzzz if you can don't show any kind of romantic..cozy...or any affectionate scene between Manik n Zoya...as it is disgusting to read....bcoz he is saying he love Nandini n same time he is showing care n affection towards Zoya...I know she was their frnd...but still it is so disturbing...(I am still actually disturbed from it)......plzzz there love for me is pure...flashback says it all...don't show any scene further with Manik n Zoya in such way....
            It's just my humble request...you can consider it or not it's upto you....( Just want to let you know about it)...
            Once again thanks for taking you time out for replying....
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ShivaniBijalwan

Hi ...I wanted to ask you when will you update... your story is really interesting...I can't wait Manik to know truth n them plan Zoya's doom...
          Plzzz....let me know till when I will be able to update...

ShivaniBijalwan

Thanks for the information........
            You know I hardly read any incomplete story...but then I read yours ....it surely is nice...but till your last update evil is winning......n I am a person who tend to overthink...... literally I couldn't sleep for whole 2 hrs thinking that what will happen......n I couldn't even stop myself from thinking about the story....I was literally scolding myself for thinking soo much....
            It's just a humble request.....if you don't mind.....plzz fastly in one or two update let in real Manik know about all the evil deeds of Zoya n her family........
            I know I mean asking too much...but now till I read this part I will not be able to be in peace...I mean whenever I will open wattpad it will read your story but current track your story is so disturbing.....
            Hope you consider this request.... just let Manik know that Nandini didn't betray him....it was all Zoya n her family...plzz...
            Sorry if anyhow you get offended...
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WaniyaJahanzeb

@ShivaniBijalwan hi and thankyou So much for reading and loving my story and I will soon do the update so be ready ❤
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