Vinzula

Hello! I am still alive, lol.
          	
          	And I'm still working on The Grove! I've added some new elements, and backstory. I'll give you an excerpt, but we'll see if it remains the same!
          	
          	Dreaming.
          	In the morning fog, Iscariot trudged through the snow. His boot crunched the packed ice. The faces of the dead stared up at me. Their armor gleamed in the morning light. Some of these men had been my age, sixteen. I did not care at that time. Winning the war was all that had mattered to me. Without victory, the death of our people was inevitable.
          	
          	I removed my helmet and asked him disgustingly, “Why must you save those who have hurt many? Let the Kahyaun bury their own dead.”
          	
          	He looked at me from where he examined those dead. “Such people, though with mistakes, deserve a chance as well. Who has not made mistakes or done foolish things? Certainly, it is inevitable. If you had died, would I not have buried you too? Or would you bury me if I had gone?”

Vinzula

Hello! I am still alive, lol.
          
          And I'm still working on The Grove! I've added some new elements, and backstory. I'll give you an excerpt, but we'll see if it remains the same!
          
          Dreaming.
          In the morning fog, Iscariot trudged through the snow. His boot crunched the packed ice. The faces of the dead stared up at me. Their armor gleamed in the morning light. Some of these men had been my age, sixteen. I did not care at that time. Winning the war was all that had mattered to me. Without victory, the death of our people was inevitable.
          
          I removed my helmet and asked him disgustingly, “Why must you save those who have hurt many? Let the Kahyaun bury their own dead.”
          
          He looked at me from where he examined those dead. “Such people, though with mistakes, deserve a chance as well. Who has not made mistakes or done foolish things? Certainly, it is inevitable. If you had died, would I not have buried you too? Or would you bury me if I had gone?”

Gigi_washere

Hii Vinzula!<3 I was wondering if you’d like to check out my Sci-fi/thriller/horror Called The Feeling Underneath! It involves mad scientists who creates “artificial humans” with powers, and their main goal is to escape from the laboratory. But will they? I’d really appreciate your votes and comments❤️ https://www.wattpad.com/story/150930589-the-feeling-underneath

Vinzula

@Gigi_washere sure! I'll check it out tomorrow then... I should have time now that I'm out of school.
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Gigi_washere

@Vinzula You can read how much you want! I just hope you like it and continue til the end. But it’s fine if you don’t ❤️
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Vinzula

@Gigi_washere Depends on how much I have to read...
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Vinzula

Hello! I'm not sure what happened to my last message, but I'm restarting work on the Grove! I'll be focusing on world building, fixing my structure, and character development. I won't be posting until it's done (if it will be). We don't know God's plan for me, but if I'm working on it, I'll be giving updates!
          
          God bless! Love you all :)

Zhrodypoo

@Vinzula woohoo hope u get fame (not sarcastic lmao)
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Vinzula

Hello! We reached 100 reads and 20 favorites! Thank you so much for reading! I’ll continue to work hard and give out the best stories I can!
          
          Love you all and God bless! :)

JohnJacobsWriter

@Vinzula aye congrats! This is such a big accomplishment for your writing journey, god bless. Looking forward to see how your writing journey continues forward.
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