tpmwrites
Hey there! I read some of your poetry, they’re pretty good :) you’ve got good instincts as a poet and you’ll keep getting better the more you do it. I’d encourage you to play around with the idea of changing up the rhyme scheme in key stanzas to really give them that extra oomph, y’know? Just something to think about :).
I just started posting my first story on here. If you have a moment to read it that would be greatly appreciated :) I’d love to hear any feedback you have!