AvaSh3

Hiiii beautiful handsome gorgeous man , u good but anyways i want your honest opinion about my book , if you don’t want to read it ,it’s fine but I want like ur honest opinion about it and like also votesss ??? Is it’s too much idk but anyways hope your life is filled with people you love and adore 

AvaSh3

Thank you , that will really help me !!! Improve 
Reply

Unknown4reasons

@AvaSh3 It was good, there are some simple mistakes, like the placing of commas. But other than some simple editing mistakes, everything is pretty good & the plot is interesting too.
Reply

dont_hide_

Ur name throws me off lol 
          My brain instantly is like
          
          Is this a youtuber in disguise secretly reading fanfiction because they like it

Unknown4reasons

@dirt_boi ok wow you just got me addicted to camp camp now xD
Reply

Unknown4reasons

@dirt_boi oh so it's like south park
Reply