Unknown-writer-2002

So everyone knows, with the mistakes created in the first book I have taken down the first My saviours Passion as people seemed to dislike it and am also debating on deleting the second 

RiannaRReid

Unknown-writer-2002

The Cohen Six, my new Fantasy-based book is now up and ready to read! Please give it a try!

Unknown-writer-2002

Thanks, I have done some editing to it. I am planning the republish it tonight
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OsekweDeborah

@Cora-Tizzard-2002..ok no problem..I will read and tell you what I think
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Unknown-writer-2002

New Book coming out soon, who's excited? Cause I am, so far I have written twelve Chapters for it, so hopefully you guys enjoy it, hope so anyway. A lot of time has gone into it!

ericstars

Your second book "my saviours passion" actually lacks the knowledge of a dominant and submissive relationship .I truly recommend you to write things you have a proper knowledge of,there was no discussion of safe words being used .Or there were no hard and soft limits discussed in the contract .Nd comparing the word pet with actual dog was saddening in your story .
          Please google about bdsm properly .
          Thanks that is all I wanna say

coralily02

Btw I am replying using my second account. People like it people don't. 
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coralily02

@ericstars it's how I see it. I understand your comment, fair enough. But comments like this DM please 
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