Toba_Speaks

@kinderjoy_101 I'll do that ASAP

curiousloi

You sent a link for you book on group chat. It's good but.....Your narrating is a bit off. The dialogue is scattered. I was confused on what was going on in some parts. You capitalize where capitals aren't supposed to be.  It's unattractive in a book. Correct that. All in all, your story is interesting. 

Toba_Speaks

@curiousloi I'll work on it. Thank you for your honest opinion. There's most to come, hopefully. And it'll be great to work with you☺
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