@Hannahberkshire It’s pretty good! I do feel like there is some metronoming between writing quality and style, though. It sort of feels like perhaps you used AI to write parts of it while other parts were written by you. I’m not going to ask you to admit to that, but if it is indeed the case that you used AI to write a portion of it, I would really like to recommend that you try your hardest to use your own writing! Using AI will never allow your vision to come true the way you want it to, and you’ll never develop your writing that way.
And if you DIDN’T use AI, then I have to ask why some portions of the story have such extremely different grammar usage and writing style than others? Writing is about consistency, so on the off chance that your writing style is just very formulaic and similar to AI, then you should probably try to make the entire story follow that style and grammar. That’s not to say you can’t break out of your writing style sometimes, but overall consistency is very important.
That being said, this is still overall a good idea! I don’t support using AI to fill in the gaps of your story because you’ll never really learn to write doing that, but even the non-AI parts are better than how my writing used to be, so if you stop using AI, you’ll be at a strong point to share your writing, develop it, and maybe one day write a book or something :)
