The_Critique

Okay, guys. I am incredibly sorry for having to do this, but I have to take down that whole last chapter. I just realized this morning that there was an entire section missing. Maybe I deleted it on accident, or maybe Wattpad did, but I know from experience that getting mad about it isn't going to help. So I'll either re-write that section and post it back up or completely re-write the whole thing. Or maybe I'll even do a different story. Point is, right now it just looks like I'm ranting about the BDSM part of the story when I'm not, and it does seem harsh to bash other people's opinions. And while I don't really care about others' feelings, I do care that I don't really just rant about the fact that it's a BDSM story in this chapter. So I have to take it down. Sorry.

thingsthatmakesounds

I found your book by accident and damn ily now.
          I've been trying so hard to find good books to read and almost all of the popular ones turn out to be so badly written. 
          I totally relate to you. XP

Comdr-Ferox

@thingsthatmakesounds 
            Hiya! 
            Same here! There are so many bad stories that promote bad things or have really bad grammar, yet a lot of people say that it's good.
            It's very irritating, and I relate to you, too!
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The_Critique

Okay, guys. I am incredibly sorry for having to do this, but I have to take down that whole last chapter. I just realized this morning that there was an entire section missing. Maybe I deleted it on accident, or maybe Wattpad did, but I know from experience that getting mad about it isn't going to help. So I'll either re-write that section and post it back up or completely re-write the whole thing. Or maybe I'll even do a different story. Point is, right now it just looks like I'm ranting about the BDSM part of the story when I'm not, and it does seem harsh to bash other people's opinions. And while I don't really care about others' feelings, I do care that I don't really just rant about the fact that it's a BDSM story in this chapter. So I have to take it down. Sorry.

mia-chan

Yay! The critique is back :D

mia-chan

They're funny! Its' like you're saying what most of the people are too scared to say. 
            
            And your sarcasm makes it even better!
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The_Critique

Thanks! :) I hope you find my reviews helpful and fun to read. :D
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The_Critique

Okay, guys. So last night, or early this morning, actually, because I couldn't sleep, I decided to upload another review. I'm telling you now because I though I should let you all know. You know, just in case you didn't see the update in your Wattpad app, or maybe you didn't get the email. Just saying... Totally kidding. Anyway, I won't be uploading on this account for a while. I thought I should let you know that piece of real information. Enjoy this chapter. :)