TheOnlyFruitBasket

Thanks for editing the part for me fruity! I really appreciate it - Claire

TheOnlyFruitBasket

Can you guys look at the two different intros I’ve written for the story and tell me which one is better. I’m kinda feeling the dinner one but I want ya’lls opinions - Claire

TheOnlyFruitBasket

Btw you story’s already giving Larry vibes, is it meant to be a 1D L.S reunion fic or platonic?
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TheOnlyFruitBasket

Both set a different kind of mood. From looking at the tags  and summary on the story you’re going for a ‘Harry had issues’ theme right? If so I would do the dinner intro, it sets the scene for his angst or whatnot. (I’ll edit it for you after school if I have time).  It’s are good tho so you could always use the meeting one later in the story for a meeting with management or smth.
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TheOnlyFruitBasket

Ignore thissssssssssssss just testing smth - Pay

TheOnlyFruitBasket

Noooooooo, most but not me (: - Fruity
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TheOnlyFruitBasket

Aren’t they all toxic? - Paige
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TheOnlyFruitBasket

I mean…I just kinda like reading about them but I’m not like a toxic one - fruity
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