
StarryBeanie13
I read your JSAB work 10/10, LOVE IT
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Comedy or tragedy y’all (I’m team comedy personally)
@TheOneAndOnlyTable I was forced to pick Comedy instead of Tragedy I want to make Dom happy for me
I read your JSAB work 10/10, LOVE IT
CONGRATS FOR 500 FOLLOWERSSS
We are forsaken we are forsaken we are forsaken we are forsaken
@LumiLikesToWrite we are forsaken WE are forsaken we ARE forsaken we are FORSAKEN WE ARE forsaken we're totally forsaken trust /j/silly
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Comedy or tragedy y’all (I’m team comedy personally)
@TheOneAndOnlyTable I was forced to pick Comedy instead of Tragedy I want to make Dom happy for me
Wait small question here- If Veeronica (or any other survivor/killer unmentioned) gets released, will you add them to the story or not? Will you make a chapter or just edit them into the previous chapters? I'm kinda curious now mb if i sound rude T_T
You’re not being rude at all! Yeah, I plan to add the new survivors/killers to the story. The way I’ll implement them is similar to how I did Taph. They’ll be forsakened during the events of the story. So yeah, I plan on adding Veeronica when she comes out. I’ll have to do some more research on her of course, but she’s definitely gonna be part of the roster soon!
@Theoneandonlytable I would like to gift thee a bowl of ice cream. For your wonderful work and personality! (Everyone else still gets pints cus yall r awesome.)
Ok I redid most of the dialogue with him from ch 12 and up. Dw, they're still plenty deranged, I'm just toning it down a bit. Who knows, they might go apeshit later on. ...they probably will.
Thinking about rewriting some of the dialogue in the latest chapter because I’m not super happy with how I’ve been writing 1x1x1x1 recently. Like, yeah, they’re supposed to be deranged, but I think I might be making him too intense. Because my general idea is that the reason he’s acting the way he is because they were scared of being discarded like how they were with Shedletsky. But idk..I also worry that I made the relationship develop too fast aghhh. >m< I might do some retconning in the next chapter along with rewriting some of 1x’s dialogue…which might escalate into me reworking the relationship as a whole because it just doesn’t feel organic to me. Please lmk your thoughts, because I’ve been having a hard time working on the next chapter because of this… Sorry for the delays T_T
I actually don't mind them like this but if you want to rewrite that'e totally fine!
WAIT WHEN DID WE HIT 100k READS WHAT THE FUCK
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