@syrma9
Hello, I read your story and I have to say that I loved it so far. I get requests like this on occasion, and usually, I read the first chapter and decide whether I want to continue or not afterward. With all the others I've read I have never wanted to continue, but reply with positive feedback to help them with their writing.
With your story, I wanted to read further. I will definitely be reading passed the first chapter because I enjoyed the prologue. It is sophisticated, detailed, and better writing than I could ever do. I love how you have written Aizen and your OC's first impression was also nice. I want to see more of her.
I hope you will continue this because it is a rare gem, and it would be a shame if something good like this wasn't to be expanded on. I can't wait to see more chapters.