ThatSalamander

Hot take real quick. 
          	
          	I totally reimagined Behind The Hills while at work... So don't be alarmed if it's taken down for a while, I gotta rethink my writing tactics. 
          	
          	I just had a solid plot and everything, so basically I need to change the first few chapters... which would be all the entire story atm.... 
          	
          	Yeah, I really need to figure myself out here with writing this. Writing anything rlly, I'm horrible at completing this stuff. 
          	
          	I should have at least some sort of first chapter up sometime tonight... or tomorrow... You know what I'll just put a little crumb here. 
          	
          	"His wings beat erratically, the clanky armor restricting his movement. But he couldn't stop, they were only a few yards behind him, their arrows whizzing by terrifyingly close to his body. He could hear them urging their large winged mounts faster. For each staggered beat he took, they took two large flaps, gaining speed at alarming rates." 

ThatSalamander

Hot take real quick. 
          
          I totally reimagined Behind The Hills while at work... So don't be alarmed if it's taken down for a while, I gotta rethink my writing tactics. 
          
          I just had a solid plot and everything, so basically I need to change the first few chapters... which would be all the entire story atm.... 
          
          Yeah, I really need to figure myself out here with writing this. Writing anything rlly, I'm horrible at completing this stuff. 
          
          I should have at least some sort of first chapter up sometime tonight... or tomorrow... You know what I'll just put a little crumb here. 
          
          "His wings beat erratically, the clanky armor restricting his movement. But he couldn't stop, they were only a few yards behind him, their arrows whizzing by terrifyingly close to his body. He could hear them urging their large winged mounts faster. For each staggered beat he took, they took two large flaps, gaining speed at alarming rates." 

redhystori

have you ever seen the movie unbroken?

ThatSalamander

@redhystori the movie is close to the book... I didn't know that Louis wrote a book, it sounds good.
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redhystori

hEC
            i haven't seen the movie yet but i've read the book, and another book written by louie himself called "don't give up, don't give in"
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anahita_leve

Hey,
          I think you should put your "Empty skies" under Adventure or Action genre. Historical lovers don't usually check out Air force stories. They are more into royal stuffs.
          
          I hope you didn't find my comment annoying. 
          
          Sincerely,
          Anahita_Leve