I do want to apologise for how long it took me to change the description of Jennifer. A lot of people pointed out how bad my description was and I'm not going to make excuses for it. I was simply a naive person who didn't have much reference.
People gave me suggestions and it still took me years to edit the story and change her description. Honestly, I don't get notifications for most comments and I forgot that I hadn't already corrected my mistake.
I can never apologise enough for this. When I got round to editing the story, I remembered the issue, took into account everyone's suggestions and did a lot of research to find a non-food description that matched the way I saw her in my mind.
Again, I truly am sorry for this