ThatOneCeres

@ThatOneCeres thanks for the feedback! I will definitely think about what you said, maybe make a few extra chapters explaining things from the other people's povs. thanks so much, and dont worry, you're not being rude. im always open to constructive critism :))

(I don't mean to be rude btw)

@-jup_iter- I just finished it a while ago and it was quite good! The characters were great and the story was unique. Although I am not exactly a writer myself, I feel like the other characters need more explaining (like the mom or the other streamer friends) need could use some backround or why they were talking and such. Either way, the story was great.