ThatGirlThatYouKnow

Hello! Can you please do me a small favour " can you please check out even my fanfic here https://www.wattpad.com/story/226236374-shadow-world-unraveled. Please tell me how is it as it is my first ever fanfic  and i'm kinda anxious that i'm messing things up" 
          Thank you:))

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