Jennifer (Jenny)

I am an evolving writer.
I am continuously trying to make my writings better. 
I know my writing isn't usually finished but it's so difficult for me to concentrate on one story while so many are running around inside my imagination. 
Thanks you if you had decided to suffer through some of my writing. I would like all kinds of criticism ,  I would really like my writing to get better. Tell me the good parts and bad parts please.