sylver

Hello, Sylver. I know you seem to have been inactive for a while, but I did skim through your book Psionic Academy and I have some thoughts, if you’d like to hear them.
          You have excellent prose and drive to write your story—one hundred chapters, posting almost every day is extremely difficult (if only I had that dedication!) You were clearly excited for the project, much respect to you for it. 
          About the story itself, I think it struggled from a lack of character voice. Shane, at the start, is a very interesting character, he’s a bored prodigy who’s sick of school and is searching fruitlessly for something greater, but he loses that when he leaves for the academy. He also doesn’t seem to have any particular arc of his own, and lacks initiative. I found this to be true of all the characters, they fell flat for me.
          I also struggled to take the Onyx League seriously, since they appear to have no real connection to Shane and don’t necessarily oppose him. They also took attention away from the main intrigue of the story: the psionic powers. I wanted to learn more about them but found I was interrupted by their nonsense.
          Anyway, those are my critiques! I am writing a book of my own called Stormbreacher, maybe you would like to check it out?

Hi there I just wanted to know if psionic academy was completed or not 

He silver am writing on a book Chronicles of the demon Slayer will u mind checking it out
          It my first book 

Liking the new cover for Psionic Academy ;)

Hello there, long time no see! I was wondering, could I write a short story based on your world of Chimera? No part of the idea is really set in stone, since I wanted to ask for your permission, but I was thinking of a girl with an eagle Chimera, And I havent really thought of a plot yet. So basically a short story fanfiction of your story. May I?

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Hey silver,
          
          I’m creating the plot of a story called the New York trials. In this story a New Yorker boy named max and other kids across the globe are kidnapped halo style by magical mountain monks which I’m calling the order of zuulu. The story has some detail similiar to your popular story, Psionic Academy which I have inspired my story from. They are taught to use their abilities which are discovered through trials a bit more harsh than how Shane discovers powers. They learn to use these abilities for both offence and defence and after years of training and learning to use their abilities properly are sent back to their homes. After settling in New York, max is attacked by a rogue monk and ultimately their fight causes a mass devastation. In a possible second book I want to introduce a hit man that never fails his mission like agent 47. He has been sent to neutralize max during the fight.
          
          I posted this to ask if I could use some of the ideas in your book the way I have used them. In this short summary of my book plot.
          
          I understand if no but would appreciate a yes

Is there gonna be. A scout sc book to chimera 

Lol at your description

I was wondering if you would check out my poetru. TY, Have a good day! :)