GeneviaGinger20
Hi, please check out my first work "The hollow soul". Feel free to provide feedback. Your opinion will be valuable. Thanks
SunflowerInstrument
SunflowerInstrument
Happy New Year from NYC!
Much Love ❤️
SunflowerInstrument
Hey ,
I will be temporarily taking down Real Adrenaline: Heartsick for editing purposes. It should be back up shortly. And Happy Holidays to those who celebrate
SunflowerInstrument
I finally finished my first book last week. I can't lie, it feels good. A calm sense of accomplishment.
SunflowerInstrument
“When you find yourself trying the decode the hidden meaning behind every little action, you will suffer and your relationships will deteriorate."
-Dr.Patel ( Real Adrenaline: Heartsick)
Have you ever found yourself looking for meaning in someone’s actions? Perhaps a hidden agenda?
SunflowerInstrument
"What is it with men and their manhood? Do you really think that money is what makes you a man? Is it a pride thing?!”
- Ranine Legrand (Real Adrenaline: Heartsick)
Have you ever argued with someone who let their pride get in the way of a solution?
SunflowerInstrument
Has anyone ever used the Story Insights before?
I think that I would prefer an actual person editing rather than a program. Anyways, I have to type 25 chapters in 2 months. I better get to it.
CheshireVibes
@SunflowerInstrument I wouldnt worry about that messing with the scoren i have a minor character that spoke in weird dialect and ogres and gnomes that spoke in a totally made up language, the report really doesnt go in that much depth. It is a very general overview. Not really a good editing program at all on that aspect. Thank you for the compliments though! You're too sweet ^-^
SunflowerInstrument
@CheshireVibes I would expect nothing less from you. Your writing is immaculate! The way my characters speak is purposely less grammatical because I want to show certain things through their speech. When a person reads what they say they might understand this but I’m not sure if a program will. I'm not sure if this will affect the score or not. Thank you for the info!
SunflowerInstrument
After chapter 20 of Real Adrenaline: Heartsick, I will be revising chapter 1-20 before continuing. Please remind me if we have a read for read going on!
SunflowerInstrument
I’ve been gone for so long guys :( but summer break is finally here. And I finally have the time I need to continue my novel !!
Faithogbonna98
Hi, thanks for the follow up. I also followed you back. I would love it if you could give my novel a shot by reading it.
https://my.w.tt/Uzeg7NGEPbb