ali_ahh-lee_babi
I’m only on chapter 2 but girl you pulled me in. The way your FMC is Bold and confident is very refreshing(not at all like mine, lol), and the MMC is too funny! So far I’m loving it , good work queen!
ali_ahh-lee_babi
Also let me know what you think of “Vows To A Devil In A Suit” no bodies commented yet ehh lol but I would really appreciate your feedback, thanks !
XOXO -Ali
Stephanie_iris
@ali_ahh-lee_babi I was going to say that. I didn't read a lot of the intros about the charactera but I read enough to get the idea. But from the first chapter to where I am rn I think you've done exceptionally well. I mean see how much followers and likes plus votes that you have
ali_ahh-lee_babi
Thank you that means a lot, I feel like the first few chapters are little dull, but their pertinent to developing the story and understanding the characters
Stephanie_iris
@ali_ahh-lee_babi I think the whole beginning of the story was intriguing plus you give a lot of details which is awesome
ali_ahh-lee_babi
I’m currently writing , right now lol, so I will check out your book in a minute. Can’t wait to read it ! And thanks for the follow bestie !!