purpleguywrites67

Can I give you some criticism, as someone who has read almost all your books?

purpleguywrites67

@SpringTrap212332 so in my opinion, your main character hardly sees adversity. They can trump anyone almost effortlessly, and they are smarter than everyone. If they fail, its usually nothing serious and is easily fixed. A few storys make sense, like when a character backstory is changed, but in my opinion, izuku midoryia is not a super genius, and her 100 percent isnt the smartest person on the planet when he can't top bakugo on a test. Now sometimes it makes sense for him to be smart, but if feels like every single mc is a genius, and people cant really relate. Other than that, i do love your books, and i hope you do keep writing!!!
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purplebowlofdeath2

Are you still planning to update your story the nightmare hero entity?

purplebowlofdeath2

@purplebowlofdeath2 forgot to put it's for the nightmare hero: entity
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purplebowlofdeath2

@SpringTrap212332 I just had an idea you could use if you want it takes place anywhere between the end of the sports festival and the end of internships izuku runs into a child and their parents the child gets bullied for their so called villainous quirk and they get excited seeing izuku in person and asks for an autograph saying they're a fan of izuku's because he proves that even with a villainous quirk they can be a hero
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SpringTrap212332

@purplebowlofdeath2 Not until I get back into Dead by Daylight stuff.
            So not for a while.
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mediaswhatif07

Hello! I hope you're doing great. I run a YouTube channel dedicated to sharing "what-if" fanfiction stories set in the My Hero Academia universe, primarily centered around the character Deku. I wanted to reach out because I would love to feature your story on my channel in an audio format, making it accessible to a wider audience, including those who may not typically read fanfiction but enjoy engaging with stories on YouTube. If you agree, I’ll ensure you receive full credit, with links to your original work in both the video itself and the description. Thank you very much for considering this request—I’m excited at the possibility of sharing your story with my audience and look forward to your response.

purpleguywrites67

Can you read my story, Hero or Villain?  I would like some criticism

purpleguywrites67

@SpringTrap212332 and the problem with that is that one for all is going to not be in the story till later
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purpleguywrites67

@SpringTrap212332 actually, im making it so that using all for one makes her a bit... Uh cruel to say the least. Read chapter 5 and you will see what i mean
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SpringTrap212332

@purpleguywrites67 Have it so she's tipping towards Villainy purely due to Tomura constantly screaming in her head, but something about the touch of the holder of One For All makes it so his voice is muted and the pain soothed.
            Prolly because Yoichi and his brother being connected through the touch overpower Tomura's perpetual rage?
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SethTDW

Hey Spring, had a thought: 
          
          What you think would happen to an Akumatised if they managed to regain control of their emotions, would they lose the Akuma or make it their own?

SethTDW

@SpringTrap212332 what if this caused a new Kwami to appear? Could be interesting
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SpringTrap212332

@SethTDW Most definitely. It's bound to mess with the connection between a user and the Miraculous. Possibly even make the safeguards/orders not apply for a shot period.
            Kwami can use their powers themselves, it's just overpowered and uncontrolled.
            Nooroo would probably have the most control of the Kwami other than Kaalki. So he could Akumatised someone during this period to fight Hawkmoth for instance even if Gabriel ordered him to never use his power on his own.
            Because let's face it. Nooroo would definitely done it at some point to be free of that monster.
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SethTDW

@SpringTrap212332 you think this sort of thing could in a way corrupt the user’s control over their miraculous and if the Kwami was held captive, become freed?
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