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S.B
I'm 18, I'm a girl, I take English Lit and Creative writing at Uni and I like writing comedy and Urban Fantasy. If you comment on my work I will always send a thank you message. Especially if it has constructive criticism. 

I'm looking for criticism. As well as interested readers who'll tell me what's up and whats really really not. 


What I mean (warning ridiculous analogy ahead): imagine my writing as an aquarium, and while some of the fish are beautiful works of fishy art, there are a good few that are just straight up dead. There's this pile in the corner, rotting away, making this really awkward smell. And no matter how much I try to clean the tank, I'm just incapable of spotting this huge corpse pile. It's almost impressive that I can miss it so frequently to be honest. Just sitting there making everyone uncomfortable.

And while in most cases you might just want to ignore the pile, thinking, 'wow, who's gonna tell the cleaner about that mess. I wouldn't wanna be them, yikes,' and then sneakin' out without leaving a tip, ignoring the gift shop and straight up bouncing onto the next stage of your: holiday, zoo trip, night out, hot date (I'm not going to presume to know why you're visiting an aquarium, you got your own things going on, I don't know your story). But I need you to suck it up and go, 'Yo cleaner, look at this huge pile of crap in the corner, sort that out,' (preferably in a more constructive manner, because while I may seem funky fresh I am in actuality a squishy soul), so I can then go, 'Oh bugger, yeah. Thanks dude, I'll fix that right up!' 

Point being, my writing could always be better. So please please please, if you liked reading this, read my works and let me know what I did well and what I didn't.