marthaaa_h

Hey, I love your stories especially the royal baby, would you mind checking out my first story “pieces of us” any feedback would be appreciated so much as it is my first story 

SparkleJune_44

@marthaaa_h I read your story and as soon as I started I was immediately confused about the  story and if I had the right one also the reader doesn't know who's point of view the story is being told from and a lot of what I read seemed fabricated or fake. My advice to you would to take it down and unpublish it learn about Harry and William and Catherine and then edit your chapters drastically. Make your story realistic but also give it a touch of  fun.
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SparkleJune_44

@marthaaa_h absolutely. I will take a look at it. 
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SparkleJune_44

@MGness It's okay. I was a learning experience for me and when I think back on those times I'm glad that I went through them. I am strong woman and I can help other people who have gone through the same thing so I don't view it as a tragedy I view it as a blessing in disguise