Souhail13

Hey lovely readers,I'm thrilled to announce that another chapter of "The Vampire Diaries" is now live! 
          	
          	Happy reading! ️
          	I just published "Episode 11: Children Of The Damned " of my story "The Vampire Diaries ". https://www.wattpad.com/1446725260?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Souhail13

alycrmt

Hi, I'm introducing one of my stories, if you are interested or looking for something interesting to read at the moment, please do be interested in this story of mine, thank you and have a nice day! <3
          
          Gwendolyn Cerine D. Dixon is known to be the perfect in everything that she does just like Karine. She is strong, gorgeous, and hard-working in any work she has to do for her family.
          
          But just like how Superman has a kryptonite that weakens him, Cerine also has one.
          
          It was one person that has continuously made her knees weak every time, that drowned her every time their eyes meet, that had done nothing but made her feel something that she's never experienced before.
          
          She knew about her feelings for him, and she also knew that this will only be a secret that she'll have to keep to herself.
          
          The secret that her heart will only scream his name forever.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/290050232-heart-that-screams-your-name

Souhail13

@alycrmt thank you  I really do appreciate it..
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alycrmt

@Souhail13 I read the first two chapters. So far, it's good but you need to separate some of your paragraphs, they're all stuck together. And there are also a few grammar mistakes and a few misuse of commas. But so far, it's good, just in need of editing.
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Souhail13

@alycrmt can you please review my story?
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Souhail13

The fun is about to begin 
          I just published "20: The sweetness of love " of my story "The Ghost ". https://www.wattpad.com/1393330512?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Souhail13&wp_originator=Eqq52pVJZdkF6gibk8V9eJu3%2FqSvdGjCX9egSTP2B79PhX42RRNYT6HPtKYMGyk%2FN4O8ZTRY3hMPp6kI1jN4eleoxB38HGar677TXT2I9ZyPok1GtmzcdkAa6Roc9uhR