Sona Agg

Hii guys soo I've posted the first chapter of my very first book...please read and review...tell me my mistakes and the parts you liked soo that I can improve further considering them in my next chapters 
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/346089511?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading_part_end&wp_uname=Sonawrittes

Hello people I've started writing my first book plz give it a try hope you all will like it 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/346089511

Do you publish on Neobook ?