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Goodmorning everyone  Sorry for the trouble I wanna promote my story I FELL INLOVE WITH THE BADBOY( BOOK #1) If your looking for a Highschool Romance na may pag ka bad boy si Boy at may Heart Problem si Girl then I'll recommend my story po. If you have time to check it out, Much Appreciated po!!
          
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Haiiii This is Khalyyyyy ♡♡
          
          I'n not a professional writer but here are some if my thoughts about your story "Leaving You". First po,yung part name po niya na "Her POV" etc, I think it would be better if "Chapter 1" etc nalang po siya then put the POV names nalang po sa baba. 
          
          Next po is the usage of "Fast Forward". Sa tingin ko po (just my opinion) mas better po if specific time (ex: 5 Months Later,A year later) yung ilalagay mo po imbis na "Fast Forward". I think mas maganda po siyang pakinggan.
          
          Last po, yung "*~*~*" dapat po nasa gitna po ito then naka bold. 
          
          Again po,I'm not a professional writer but I think those could help you. Thanks for reading these and I hope it could help!!
          
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Philippians 4:6 
          
          Do not worry about anything, but in everything by prayer and supplication with thanksgiving let your requests be made known to God. And the peace of God, which surpasses all understanding, will guard your hearts and your minds in Christ Jesus. 
          
          
          >> Hello poo! Goodmorning and have a nice dayy, dont forget to loveyourselffffff