Shiz__Aib

I'm hesitating to unpublish the chapters I've written so far in order to rewrite them, because I think that if I can't continue, it's because I really don't like how I started my fanfic ✋

Shiz__Aib

Should I always use an external pov, or alternate between external pov and character pov? 
          
          I feel like I'm not conveying people's emotions well enough by using an outside pov 
          
          That's really something that's holding me back in Chapter 4